Ask Pandas1 month ago
Hey Pandas, Write Or Share An Original Poem Or Song (Closed)
Do it!
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#1
Tis something I wrote a while ago
I’ve expected my own fate
Death is the path I’ll take
I’m on my knee crying now
We’re did she go…
I know I messed up but I still need her here
With out I’ve fallen down
Cuts on my wrist. Blood on my hands
I can’t do it no more
I’ve reached my breaking point
I’m cold with out her
Every thing fades away
Final score:
3points
#2
Start of a song, rough draft
I want Someone to hold me tight,
Someone to comb my hair,
Someone to wipe my eyes,
Someone to just be there,
I want some one to just be there,
I want someone to just
Care
Final score:
2points
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Dear Addiction, It's true that I loved you and gave you years of my life I was at your mercy- without you I couldn't suffice. I loved the drain, the taste, the smell You gave me thirty minutes of pleasure I lived hours in Hell. I realized one night while lying in bed You wanted nothing more than to see me dead. You nearly succeeded- I came close to giving in But I came to my senses and let my recovery begin. I won't say I don't miss you because that is untrue But I've learned I am strong enough to live without you. I never thought I'd be able to say goodbye But I deserve more out of life than your lies. Gone Forever, Marsha
That is good!
The poem, not the addiction obviously
Dear Addiction, It's true that I loved you and gave you years of my life I was at your mercy- without you I couldn't suffice. I loved the drain, the taste, the smell You gave me thirty minutes of pleasure I lived hours in Hell. I realized one night while lying in bed You wanted nothing more than to see me dead. You nearly succeeded- I came close to giving in But I came to my senses and let my recovery begin. I won't say I don't miss you because that is untrue But I've learned I am strong enough to live without you. I never thought I'd be able to say goodbye But I deserve more out of life than your lies. Gone Forever, Marsha
That is good!
The poem, not the addiction obviously