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Story Idea: Any Feedback?

So, I had this idea for a story about this family that has 39 kids from past marriages and stuff. I have all the kid organization, and think that I have decided who is telling the story, but I would appreciate it if people looked this over and gave me constructive criticism and suggestions. Thank you!

Family tree (upsidedown, sorry)

(other) Parents of kids and b-day months

Story Idea: Any Feedback?

Ages, months, and future kids

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Everything in alphabetical order

Story Idea: Any Feedback?

I am an ambitious teenager, with a high reading level. I can read inch-thick books in a day, and want to be a writer. I have some stories in processing mode. Sometimes I act like an 85yo.

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I am an ambitious teenager, with a high reading level. I can read inch-thick books in a day, and want to be a writer. I have some stories in processing mode. Sometimes I act like an 85yo.

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My name is Aelita and I have been an Editor for Bored Panda since 2019. I spend my days working with my amazing team and making articles the best they can be. Fantasy and magic have always ruled over my world, from movies to TV shows, to Video Games to tabletop games like Dungeos and Dragons, I try to find magic in every part of my life. Writing is a big part of me too, I hope to publish a fantasy novel one day. I also enjoy playing guitar and singing, as music always help me to get in a great mood. I have an adorable German Shepherd named Hela and we get into all kinds of adventures together.

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