Story Idea: Any Feedback?

So, I had this idea for a story about this family that has 39 kids from past marriages and stuff. I have all the kid organization, and think that I have decided who is telling the story, but I would appreciate it if people looked this over and gave me constructive criticism and suggestions. Thank you!

Family tree (upsidedown, sorry)

(other) Parents of kids and b-day months

Story Idea: Any Feedback?

Ages, months, and future kids

Story Idea: Any Feedback?

Everything in alphabetical order

Story Idea: Any Feedback?

Callia Donoven

Author, Community member

I am an ambitious teenager, with a high reading level. I can read inch-thick books in a day, and want to be a writer. I have some stories in processing mode. Sometimes I act like an 85yo.

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Fantasy and magic have always ruled over my world, from movies to TV shows, to Video Games to tabletop games like Dungeos and Dragons, I try to find magic in every part of my life. Writing is a big part of me too, I hope to publish a fantasy novel one day. I also enjoy playing guitar and singing, as music always help me to get in a great mood.

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